literature

Hold me

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Literature Text

Hold me tight,
And kiss me goodnight,
Whisper in my ear,
So I have no fear,

Hold me close,
And say you love me the most,
Kiss me and be gentle,
Because you're special.
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CrimsonSunset218's avatar
"Because you are special"
or
"I know you are special"

May read better in that last line, but then again... Those are my words, not yours and it's your poem meant to carry your feelings and my words may not accurately convey them.

*smiles*  This one is really good.  I couldn't resist commenting.  I think I've noticed that I comment on those things I enjoy most.  I hope I don't offend with my suggestion, it is after all Your poem. :)